i like it~

and i have trouble formulating the why... it seems like i'm missing the proper literary criticism vocabulary XD

so i'll try to say it in plain words: i like how it shifts from the first paragraph, which addresses noone in particular, to a form which is actually adressing someone, and one person alone. and the in-between bit, "What I’m trying to say is", the way you'd say it in a conversation, though it could also be directed at the reader.

i think that's a very strong way to constue a poem, and the simple imagery of the match becomes more than just symbolism - it somehow carries the power of actually confronting someone with it's meaning.

(does this make sense? i hope it does @_@)

^_^

That's very deep and heartfelt. And so very very true.

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I reject your reality and substitute my own!

I think it made a lot of sense!

You actually broke it down better than I could have I think!

Thank you, I'm glad you like it!